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[hyphema]

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<2d> everybody's a critic

[hyphema]

uh thats not really scary mate sorry

i mean i guess like as a thing that happened if you were there itd be scary but as a story its just liek

anti uh

the endings a bit too rushed

might make a good movie tho if you spice up the killer guy a bit

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

[R U D E]

I never said I was good at telling stories but at least I ain't making shit up.

<2d>

[hyphema]

you said it was gonna be scary though

[HE DID.]

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

Getting killed is scary.

<2d>

[hyphema]

yeah but a story abt a scary thing isnt always a scary story

that was just kind of a story

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

Okay.

Thanks for the news flash.

<2d>

[hyphema]

its ok im sure you can write a scary story you can even start with that

you just gotta put more scary bits in

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

Like.

What.

<2d>

[hyphema]

well like you gotta have some suspense and stuff youknow

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

What do you mean by suspense.

<2d>

[hyphema]

you know when you wana know what happens next??

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

Oh that.

So.

How do you add suspense.

<2d>

[hyphema]

you gotta have like more

stuff

between all the killings you know???

<KILLER ANGEL>

[zackthekiller]

What kind of stuff.

Like doing stuff or just filler stuff.

<2d>

[hyphema]

both probably i think

both